tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post2349376265643647912..comments2023-11-05T08:32:53.307+00:00Comments on Paper Moon: Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-78986962613603984732010-10-04T21:49:24.688+01:002010-10-04T21:49:24.688+01:00Thanks Devika, good to see you again.Thanks Devika, good to see you again.Paul Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14956559361042183430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-31674952508919113772010-10-04T16:24:09.460+01:002010-10-04T16:24:09.460+01:00Good poems, added Paul, as always :)
yes this is ...Good poems, added Paul, as always :)<br /><br />yes this is haiku-like and to catch the uncertainty of a little bird is really lovely, <br /><br />wishes, <br />devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-30127579298531638082010-10-03T10:30:30.595+01:002010-10-03T10:30:30.595+01:00Pacze, thank you for dropping by.
Coal tits are fr...Pacze, thank you for dropping by.<br />Coal tits are frequent visitors to our garden. To be honest it is only the last 18 months or so that I have become aware of which bird is which, after a poet friend took me bird watching. I have a real passion for it now. It can sound so dull, but actually the peace and quiet at the local reserve is a gift.<br /><br />Hope to see you here again.Paul Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14956559361042183430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-43233745825307673432010-10-02T23:51:16.729+01:002010-10-02T23:51:16.729+01:00I didn't know a coal tit was a bird, but, more...I didn't know a coal tit was a bird, but, more to the point: I like the way "tit" echoes the sound of "uncertainty".Pacze Mojhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04455647830303860446noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-56814683896514705232010-10-02T09:39:16.462+01:002010-10-02T09:39:16.462+01:00LG, it's great to hear that you are writing yo...LG, it's great to hear that you are writing your own tanka poems.<br />The form has so much to offer in terms of expressing oneself in bitesize chunks, that often open out to almost unimaginable proportions.<br /><br />If you find the poem below on this blog I have written a little about the tanka form (as I see it)you may find it useful as you explore the form.<br /><br />a jester <br />all these years<br />I've worn<br />so many smiles<br />I could not own<br /><br />If I can help in any way with your writing practice please feel free to ask. I will do what I can.<br /><br />Thanks again for dropping by and leaving such positive feedback.Paul Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14956559361042183430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-16705341078954539622010-10-02T07:12:04.872+01:002010-10-02T07:12:04.872+01:00I love the Tanka form of poetry you publish. I can...I love the Tanka form of poetry you publish. I can feel the words with you and have started writing my own as I feel it's the form I want to say some things in....not too long, not too short, just right...but of course it takes practice to get it right!<br /><br />Take careLGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06904665278565257746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-15438604342014808612010-09-30T20:25:55.294+01:002010-09-30T20:25:55.294+01:00Thanks John.Thanks John.Paul Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14956559361042183430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-46465441786314826702010-09-28T22:39:59.294+01:002010-09-28T22:39:59.294+01:00great sets Paul
johngreat sets Paul<br />johnJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-69344055412757115622010-09-28T20:27:52.523+01:002010-09-28T20:27:52.523+01:00Cheers Frank. This one came yesterday almost haiku...Cheers Frank. This one came yesterday almost haiku-like.Paul Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14956559361042183430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-26905360160143959142010-09-28T18:02:13.865+01:002010-09-28T18:02:13.865+01:00A very nice contrast of images, Paul. Lovit...A very nice contrast of images, Paul. Lovit...Frank...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.com