tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post5797973141025702355..comments2023-11-05T08:32:53.307+00:00Comments on Paper Moon: Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-90866068848710022612010-10-10T17:37:21.247+01:002010-10-10T17:37:21.247+01:00That's great to hear LG.
Be natural, honest,...That's great to hear LG. <br /><br />Be natural, honest, open, concise and your work will bloom.Paul Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14956559361042183430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-6681969026799449622010-10-10T07:34:41.837+01:002010-10-10T07:34:41.837+01:00Nicely done. I've gone to read up something ab...Nicely done. I've gone to read up something about Tanka, currently I am trying to write one piece everyday or every second day just to get started, will have toweed the weeds out first then I might e mail you one or two for feedback..but it's wonderful to come read your stuff here, keepit up.....LGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06904665278565257746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-59568637897542958892010-10-07T12:50:05.515+01:002010-10-07T12:50:05.515+01:00Thanks John.Thanks John.Paul Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14956559361042183430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-49349443385503430652010-10-07T08:15:41.541+01:002010-10-07T08:15:41.541+01:00delightful sets as usual Paul
johndelightful sets as usual Paul<br />johnJohn McDonaldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02306609410526737715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-39055119605993456352010-10-06T13:42:31.339+01:002010-10-06T13:42:31.339+01:00Thank you Dave & Gillena I appreciate your com...Thank you Dave & Gillena I appreciate your comments very much.Paul Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14956559361042183430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-1485204300240101762010-10-06T13:08:44.639+01:002010-10-06T13:08:44.639+01:00so well structured,the pivot so well,the reader ca...so well structured,the pivot so well,the reader can have fun rearranging the reaingof lines arriving at your intial intent each time<br /><br /><i>much love<br />gillena</i>Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-90213656210599977542010-10-05T23:40:55.273+01:002010-10-05T23:40:55.273+01:00Hi Paul - I have been enjoying these bird tanka. G...Hi Paul - I have been enjoying these bird tanka. Good stuff!Dave Serjeanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06479441346697423799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-11192735986014684292010-10-05T21:03:12.095+01:002010-10-05T21:03:12.095+01:00Thanks Frank, your comments are a source of encour...Thanks Frank, your comments are a source of encouragement.Paul Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14956559361042183430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-78292500452569079612010-10-05T16:43:49.815+01:002010-10-05T16:43:49.815+01:00A wonderful juxtaposition of images, Paul...A wonderful juxtaposition of images, Paul...Frank...https://www.blogger.com/profile/02197806933052269135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-13674955083756397322010-10-05T14:13:14.100+01:002010-10-05T14:13:14.100+01:00shootingstar, welcome to Paper Moon. I am glad to ...shootingstar, welcome to Paper Moon. I am glad to hear you enjoyed your first visit. You are welcome any time.<br /><br />Devika, Pacze Moj & Jason thank you for taking the time to comment. As always it is much appreciated.<br /><br />Pacze Moi, the repetition of 'yes' as you say could underline that loneliness is / has been experienced more than once.<br /><br />In writing the poem I used it to break through the robin's persistent song...<br /><br />yes yes I can hear you... <br /><br />I understand what you are singing...<br /><br />I hope that makes sense.Paul Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14956559361042183430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-59896383755269109712010-10-05T13:10:29.808+01:002010-10-05T13:10:29.808+01:00I really like that.I really like that.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-18468033259448021272010-10-05T08:24:14.198+01:002010-10-05T08:24:14.198+01:00The repetition of "yes", knowing lonelin...The repetition of "yes", knowing loneliness more than once?Pacze Mojhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04455647830303860446noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-69463154795192026972010-10-05T08:00:06.375+01:002010-10-05T08:00:06.375+01:00Perhaps i should be saying we need to be 'alon...Perhaps i should be saying we need to be 'alone' to write...and knowing 'loneliness' is key to a good poet, <br /><br />thats understood i guess, still wanted to clarify, <br /><br />wishes, <br />devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-49726154816397623842010-10-05T04:19:25.566+01:002010-10-05T04:19:25.566+01:00We need our loneliness to write, and to sing too, ...We need our loneliness to write, and to sing too, sometimes...But watching the birds, i always thought...the lonely ones sings the sweetest, <br /><br />beautiful again, Paul :)<br /><br />wishes, <br />devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-82650242987850310152010-10-05T04:16:09.388+01:002010-10-05T04:16:09.388+01:00This comment has been removed by the author.Devika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4235706438566397182.post-18264305183594005532010-10-05T00:02:14.206+01:002010-10-05T00:02:14.206+01:00Just passed by your blog,n the stay was good. :)Just passed by your blog,n the stay was good. :)shootingstarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11629406938279899610noreply@blogger.com