Wednesday, 3 September 2008

this stillness
I seek again and again
returns to me
like the wind
when it wills

Modern English Tanka V2 No2 Winter 2007

3 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I like this very much. Good placement of 'when' to slow the last line down.

sueranford said...

just beautiful! as always

janet said...

i like the sounds in this...and wish i could always find such stillness myself.