Sunday, 11 January 2009

your voice
a quiet whisper
and once again
the whole world
is spring

Modern English Tanka V3 No2 Winter 2008

2 comments:

Frank Williams said...

Paul: I love the rejuvenating effect that a quiet voice can have on a person – a lovely poem. Frank…

Liam Wilkinson said...

Paul - thank you for the comment you left at my blog. I'm a great admirer of your tanka! Great to see you too have a blog.

'your voice' is a perfect tanka, perfectly paced...I love the way it expands from the subtle to the magnificent.