Sunday 8 February 2009

this solitude
I craved so long
and now
wishing you were here
beside me

Modern English Tanka V2 No2 Winter 2007

4 comments:

Frank... said...

There is beautiful contradiction in play here – nice one.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Frank. This is one of my early tanka & still a favourite.

mattm said...

Paul, you sum up the perennial (man's?) grass is always greener outlook well here, Matt

Paul Smith said...

Thanks Matt.