Tanka and other short form poetry
This is lovely tanka Paul.The 4th line seems to just pull the whole poem neatly together.
Wonderful!all my best,AlanWith Words Online Haiku Competition.p.s.I might have something lined up for Birmingham next year so watch this space! ;-)
great stuff Pauljohn
Alan & John thank you for your kind comments.
sublimely simple and packing a profound punch.
Thank you so much Beryl, it is good to know when a poem speaks deeply.
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