Saturday, 3 October 2009

late summer -
on this day of glimmering sea
and sky
I've become
the wind's song

Modern English Tanka V3 No4 Summer 2009

10 comments:

Devika said...

Very nice, Paul :)

wishes,
devika

mattm said...

Good stuff Paul, Matt

Paul Smith said...

Devika, Matt, thank you for your comments.

Laure said...

such sound

such movement

such freedom

Kristin Riggs said...

ahhh...lovely melody. :)

Paul Smith said...

Hi Laure, Kirstin thank you for this.

to lose yourself
for just a moment
is forever

Paul Smith said...

Of course I meant Kristin!

Kristin Riggs said...

I know, Paul! I also sometimes think faster than I type. :)
I read this again and enjoyed it just as much the second time...
You should read the one I just posted...here you spoke of the wind's song and tonight I spoke of the night's song. Nature is full of beautiful music. :)

John McDonald said...

well done Paul
john

Paul Smith said...

Cheers John.