Thursday, 28 January 2010

autumn dawn -
last night's sky dripping
from the eaves

MAGNAPOETS issue 5 January 2010

14 comments:

Frank Williams said...

A beautiful haiku Paul - love it...

Kristin Riggs said...

This is lovely, Paul. Hope you are doing well.

Dave Serjeant said...

Hi Paul - nice haiku.

Paul Smith said...

Hi Frank, Kristin, Dave, thanks for the comments. I'm on a go slow at the moment with a very painful back. Hey ho!!!

Frank Williams said...

Hi Paul:

Sorrry to hear about your back;I hope that you feel better soon.

Best, Frank...

Dave Serjeant said...

backs! Apparently I still have rock hard muscles around lumbar No 4 after doing my back in eight years ago. Hasn't given me any jip since, though.

Congratulations on your Presence spot, by the way.

Devika said...

Beautiful haiku, Paul :)

So less poems from you -- hope all is well,

wishes,
devika

Devika said...

Oh i just read the comments....Hope you feel better soon, :)

wishes,
devika

Paul Smith said...

Thank you all for your comments / kind wishes.

Glad you enjoyed the Presence spot Dave, I thought it came across quite well. (But what do I know???)

John McDonald said...

excellent sets Paul
john

Paul Smith said...

Thanks John.

Alan Summers said...

I really don't know what it is about your poetry, and I will never wish to disconstruct your poems too far: but they are almost always unfailingly breathtaking.

Alan
With Words
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Paul Smith said...

Thanks Alan. The renga party in Bath sounds fun!

Alan Summers said...

I know you'd make a great contribution to the renga session.

all my best,

Alan
Alan’s Area 17 blog
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