Tanka and other short form poetry
Exquisite agony, beautifully expressed, Paul.
tranquillity of the heart followsthe final breath..?!...amazing poem!Renée
Thank you Brian, I'm touched by your words as ever.Hi Renee, I like your new profile picture.You are so kind and your comments have a poetic appeal of their own. Thank you.
A well crafted haiku that I can empathise with. It's certainly not an easy moment to capture (see my effort in Blithe Spirit 20:3). I hope that being able to express your loss helps to ease the pain like it has done for me.
Thanks Dave, I'll take a look at 20:3.Where would we be without poetry?...
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