Thursday 9 February 2012

I would not want
to wake again
if I could hold you
endlessly
in a dream

6 comments:

Kay Tracy said...

This is very tender, Paul. It's nice to see your work again.
~Kay

Frank... said...

A well-crafted tanka, Paul. Indeed a tender moment...

bazza said...

So much said with so few words. Excellent!
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Dave Serjeant said...

well done Paul, good one!

Paul Smith said...

Thank you all for dropping by. I do appreciate your continued support.

suzie said...

haven't visited your blog for ages Paul, thought I'd pass by and yes I haven't been disappointed!