Paper Moon

Wednesday 13 June 2012

you probe
the depths of me
dark river
as if my mystery
were somehow less obscure...

Blithe Spirit V22 N1 March 2012

Frank... said...: A very atmospheric tanka, Paul - a lot to think about...; 14 June 2012 at 13:22
Gillena Cox said...: i like the reversal of roles here; river/poet

much love...; 14 June 2012 at 16:04
Brian said...: This speaks to the kind of identification that truly reveals myself to me. A beautiful work, Paul.; 19 June 2012 at 15:50
Paul Smith said...: Thank you Frank, Gillena & Brian, as ever I deeply value your support...; 6 July 2012 at 19:21
janetld said...: Really like this one. Unique - and says so much. j.; 10 September 2012 at 22:14