Tanka and other short form poetry
I like this very much. Good placement of 'when' to slow the last line down.
just beautiful! as always
i like the sounds in this...and wish i could always find such stillness myself.
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I like this very much. Good placement of 'when' to slow the last line down.
just beautiful! as always
i like the sounds in this...and wish i could always find such stillness myself.
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