Paper Moon

Saturday, 11 April 2009

facing me
on this bright autumn day
two sunflowers -
for once I am happy
to reap what I've sown

Modern English Tanka V3 No3 Spring 2009

Frank... said...: This tanka is spot on Paul...; 11 April 2009 at 13:08
Paul Smith said...: Thank you Frank.; 13 April 2009 at 08:27
Unknown said...: Hi Paul.

Loved this one.; 16 April 2009 at 21:36
Paul Smith said...: Welcome Stuart & thank you for the comment.; 17 April 2009 at 16:09