Paper Moon

Sunday, 5 April 2009

walking
through autumn leaves
I see the future
on an elemental level
as certain

Modern English Tanka V3 No3 Spring 2009

Frank... said...: This is lovely tanka Paul.The 4th line seems to just pull the whole poem neatly together.; 5 April 2009 at 17:47
Paul Smith said...: Cheers Frank.; 5 April 2009 at 21:21
Area 17 said...: Wonderful!

all my best,
Alan
With Words Online Haiku Competition
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p.s.
I might have something lined up for Birmingham next year so watch this space! ;-); 6 April 2009 at 11:38
John McDonald said...: great stuff Paul

john; 6 April 2009 at 14:56
Paul Smith said...: Alan & John thank you for your kind comments.; 7 April 2009 at 12:16
Beryl Singleton Bissell said...: sublimely simple and packing a profound punch.; 8 April 2009 at 21:41
Paul Smith said...: Thank you so much Beryl, it is good to know when a poem speaks deeply.; 9 April 2009 at 15:56