Paper Moon

Tuesday, 2 June 2009

looking back
from the steamed mirror
my distorted face
beneath the smooth skin
how much remains unknown

Modern English Tanka V3 No2 Winter 2008

Frank... said...: An intriguing tanka with many layers, Paul...; 2 June 2009 at 21:53
John McDonald said...: yes many layers well done Paul
john; 3 June 2009 at 17:03
Paul Smith said...: Thanks guys.; 5 June 2009 at 14:52