Tanka and other short form poetry
This poem really spoke to me, Paul :)I know I'm in chains in every other aspect....I sort of carry my freedom in my head :)wishes, devikaps: glad to know all going well with you; I too am fine :)
Oh...wow, Paul. I feel this one, really! Amazing work!
Like Devika I carry my freedom in my head Paul. A lovely poem...
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Thank you all for your kind comments. This was one of my early attempts at the tanka form and it has aged well I think.Good to have you back Frank.
And so it seems we all agree that this piece makes us feel. It also makes me wonder how we question the walls built around us.Well done.T
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This poem really spoke to me, Paul :)
I know I'm in chains in every other aspect....I sort of carry my freedom in my head :)
wishes,
devika
ps: glad to know all going well with you; I too am fine :)
Oh...wow, Paul. I feel this one, really! Amazing work!
Like Devika I carry my freedom in my head Paul. A lovely poem...
nice group paul
john
Thank you all for your kind comments. This was one of my early attempts at the tanka form and it has aged well I think.
Good to have you back Frank.
And so it seems we all agree that this piece makes us feel. It also makes me wonder how we question the walls built around us.
Well done.
T
T, thank you for dropping by and leaving a comment, it is appreciated.
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