Tanka and other short form poetry
Our ephemeral lives and the smoke interweave beautifully in this poem, Paul...
Very interesting juxtaposition and imagery, Paul, wishes, devika
The bible tells us that life is a vapor, but that truth becomes more real with each passing year, doesn't it? So perfectly stated, Paul. Makes me want to make the most out of today...
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very indianesque : merges with my philosophya wisp of smokeone moment risingthen gone -
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Our ephemeral lives and the smoke interweave beautifully in this poem, Paul...
Very interesting juxtaposition and imagery, Paul,
wishes,
devika
The bible tells us that life is a vapor, but that truth becomes more real with each passing year, doesn't it? So perfectly stated, Paul. Makes me want to make the most out of today...
Thank you all for the comments, always appreciated.
very indianesque : merges with my philosophy
a wisp of smoke
one moment rising
then gone -
Serendipity, thank you for dropping by and leaving your comment, it is much appreciated.
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