Paper Moon

Sunday, 11 April 2010

as if tomorrow
had yet to find us
we make love
beneath the stars
one last time

Gusts No.11 Spring/Summer 2010

Frank... said...: A very amospheric/emotional tanka, Paul...; 13 April 2010 at 13:39
Paul Smith said...: Thanks Frank, I'm glad it spoke.; 14 April 2010 at 19:07
Kristin Riggs said...: Tender, evocative...beautiful. Love it, Paul.; 14 April 2010 at 20:15
Paul Smith said...: Kristin, thank you for your comment as ever very much appreciated.; 17 April 2010 at 20:32
Sam said...: I really love the feeling of this poem, it really resonates.; 22 April 2010 at 22:33
Cindybrown said...: That is beautiful!!! Love it!; 23 April 2010 at 01:12
Chi said...: This poem got me sigh all night long. Living as if today is the last day is the essence of romance, I believe.; 23 April 2010 at 14:52
Paul Smith said...: Hi Sam, Cindy and Chico, thank you all for your encouraging comments and WELCOME to Paper Moon.; 23 April 2010 at 15:09