Paper Moon

Friday, 9 July 2010

I feel the weight of me
more and more
as swallows
weave their signature
through sky

Devika Jyothi said...: i can relate with this one,

good poem, Paul :)

wishes,
devika; 10 July 2010 at 05:06
Frank... said...: A beautifully woven poem, Paul...; 10 July 2010 at 16:08
Kristin Riggs said...: Sigh...just gorgeous, Paul. :); 10 July 2010 at 18:52
Paul Smith said...: Hi Devika, Frank (good to have you back!) and Kristin, the grace of swallows in flight never ceases to move me. I'm glad this one worked for you.; 12 July 2010 at 12:06
John McDonald said...: deeelightful! stuff Paul
john; 12 July 2010 at 23:15
Paul Smith said...: Cheers John.; 13 July 2010 at 14:21
Anonymous said...: Really love this, Paul.; 14 July 2010 at 08:36
Paul Smith said...: Thank you Liam, you are most kind.; 15 July 2010 at 13:45
Dianne said...: the swallows send a thrill through our weighted souls! Excellent.
present and attentive
Dianne; 15 July 2010 at 15:30
Paul Smith said...: Thank you Dianne, I'm pleased this one spoke so widely.; 15 July 2010 at 15:48