Paper Moon

Saturday, 24 July 2010

sunflowers
colour the breeze
at the meadow's edge
as we walk
into our dream

Lyrical Passion Poetry E-Zine

Frank... said...: This is a very colourful haiku, Paul. I can smell the breeze; 24 July 2010 at 17:34
Devika Jyothi said...: Beautiful poem, Paul :)

wishes,
devika; 24 July 2010 at 18:46
joanne said...: i've just discovered your lovely place here and am so happy to have done so... and especially to have landed on this post first thing. How I love the sunflower.; 24 July 2010 at 20:47
John McDonald said...: lovely stuff Paul
john; 27 July 2010 at 08:54
Paul Smith said...: Hi Frank, Devika, Joanne & John, thank you for your comments.

Joanne I'm glad that you stumbled upon Paper Moon and hope you will return.; 27 July 2010 at 09:53
Kristin Riggs said...: Whimsical, Paul. I really enjoyed this one!; 28 July 2010 at 02:07
Paul Smith said...: Thank you Kristin & congratulations (again) on your wonderful news.; 28 July 2010 at 08:13