Tanka and other short form poetry
Excellent stuff Paul!
Thanks Dave!
where meaning won't expire
Thank you S. I love the way you offer a few words by way of comment. Thank you so much.to that place'where meaningwon't expire'she drifts silentlylike a paper swan
You have a great way of conveying emotion, Paul. I like this a lot...
borrowed your swanand made her drown
Thank you Frank. It means so much coming from you.S, I have just seen your own 'paper swan' on your blog. Thank you.
It's really hard to choose a favorite! Luckily we can have many!
I, thank you so much for your kind words. I'm sorry it has taken a while to respond.
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Excellent stuff Paul!
Thanks Dave!
where meaning won't expire
Thank you S. I love the way you offer a few words by way of comment. Thank you so much.
to that place
'where meaning
won't expire'
she drifts silently
like a paper swan
You have a great way of conveying emotion, Paul. I like this a lot...
borrowed your swan
and made her drown
Thank you Frank. It means so much coming from you.
S, I have just seen your own 'paper swan' on your blog. Thank you.
It's really hard to choose a favorite! Luckily we can have many!
I, thank you so much for your kind words. I'm sorry it has taken a while to respond.
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