Tanka and other short form poetry
a sad poem, Paul...yet, through the dark, through the light, with swans, without swans, the river of life flows, wishes, devika
A very atmospheric poem, Paul.
Hi Devika, Frank. Thank you for your comments.Yes Devika the river runs on with or without us...
So rich. Not a place for swans.
yes Paul...and think of it that way, there isn't anything to be sad about :) wishes, devika
Hi Jason, Devika, I'm glad this one spoke to you, thanks for the comments.
I simply love this, Paul.
Thanks Kristin, I appreciate your kind words.
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a sad poem, Paul...yet, through the dark, through the light, with swans, without swans, the river of life flows,
wishes,
devika
A very atmospheric poem, Paul.
Hi Devika, Frank. Thank you for your comments.
Yes Devika the river runs on with or without us...
So rich. Not a place for swans.
yes Paul...and think of it that way, there isn't anything to be sad about :)
wishes,
devika
Hi Jason, Devika, I'm glad this one spoke to you, thanks for the comments.
I simply love this, Paul.
Thanks Kristin, I appreciate your kind words.
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