Paper Moon

Friday, 3 December 2010

she sees
something beautiful in me
I can tell
by the flowers
in her eyes

Frank... said...: That a really lovely poem, Paul...; 3 December 2010 at 14:03
earthgirl said...: beautiful indeed...I can almost see the petals drifting down her cheek...; 3 December 2010 at 17:45
Gillena Cox said...: nice

much love
gillena; 5 December 2010 at 01:43
Paul Smith said...: Hi Frank, Angie, Gillena, thank you so much for your comments... This one has a special resonance for me, I'm glad you enjoyed it.; 5 December 2010 at 12:14
S said...: like how the first part connects to the second; 6 December 2010 at 00:30
Anonymous said...: The Beauty Lies in the Sparkle of your eyes ,that places tiny rosebuds ,starting to bloom in her eyes for you; 6 December 2010 at 06:58
Paul Smith said...: Hi S, Betcha, thank you for comments, always appreciated.; 6 December 2010 at 10:03
Anonymous said...: What a bright spot this morning.

I really liked this.; 6 December 2010 at 12:48
Paul Smith said...: Thanks Jason, I'm glad you enjoyed it...; 7 December 2010 at 12:00
Kristin Riggs said...: Just lovely, Paul! Hope you are doing well.

-Kristin; 13 December 2010 at 07:35
Paul Smith said...: Thanks for dropping by Kristin...; 14 December 2010 at 14:50