Tanka and other short form poetry
these are just great Paul I love my visits herejohn
fluttery
freedom and beauty and serenity...Renée
The light touch always wins over. I wish my own heartbeat as gently as the one you describe here, but alas...
very nice, Paul :)wishes, devika
i'm a hopeless romantic so i like the many levels in this genteel versemuch love...
Thank you all for your comments.each moment bringsits own surprise...just listen
You are awesome, but you know I think that already. Cheers!
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these are just great Paul I love my visits here
john
fluttery
freedom and beauty and serenity...
Renée
The light touch always wins over. I wish my own heartbeat as gently as the one you describe here, but alas...
very nice, Paul :)
wishes,
devika
i'm a hopeless romantic so i like the many levels in this genteel verse
much love...
Thank you all for your comments.
each moment brings
its own surprise...
just listen
You are awesome, but you know I think that already. Cheers!
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