Paper Moon

Thursday, 29 September 2011

singing the song
of forever
ten billion suns
appeared
like daisies

Brian said...: A perfect tanka in every way, Paul.; 29 September 2011 at 15:30
Kristin Riggs said...: What imagery!!! Love it.; 30 September 2011 at 03:52
John McDonald said...: lovely stuff here Paul as usual
john; 30 September 2011 at 08:37
Frank... said...: A very visual tanka, Paul...; 30 September 2011 at 10:25
Anonymous said...: the song of the beautiful light...
Renée; 6 October 2011 at 06:50
Paul Smith said...: Thank you All for your kind comments. I hope all is well with you...; 13 October 2011 at 14:20