Thursday, 2 July 2009

fortress mind -
all these years
and still
this moat
these walls

Modern English Tanka V2 No4 Summer 2008

4 comments:

Laure said...

i encounter isolation here

i think i understand.

bn said...

i think there must be a drawbridge some where!

Paul Smith said...

Thank you both, I appreciate your comments.

Devika said...

We either isolate ourselves, or the world isolates us...been there many a while,

good tanka, Paul

wishes,
devika