Thursday, 23 July 2009

adding a touch
of blue to the breeze
dragonfly

MAGNAPOETS Issue 4 July 2009

8 comments:

Devika said...

that was unique, Paul :)

wishes,
devika

T.Migratorius said...

I just found your blog by my random clicking from another... I am enthralled with your tanka and haiku. This latest addition to Paper Moon is perfect.

John McDonald said...

terrific one Paul
john

Laure said...

Paul, you've distilled the moment to its essence beautifully. the sense of the lightness of touch is strong for me in this verse. really beautiful.

Dalloway said...

lovely... as Laure says, it shows a light touch

Paul Smith said...

Thank you All for your kind comments. I am touched by your generosity.

Welcome to Migratorius and Dalloway.

Frank Williams said...

This is a lovely haiku Paul with many layers. Sorry, I thought I'd left a comment earlier...

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Frank, your comments are always appreciated.