Tanka and other short form poetry
that was unique, Paul :)wishes, devika
I just found your blog by my random clicking from another... I am enthralled with your tanka and haiku. This latest addition to Paper Moon is perfect.
terrific one Pauljohn
Paul, you've distilled the moment to its essence beautifully. the sense of the lightness of touch is strong for me in this verse. really beautiful.
lovely... as Laure says, it shows a light touch
Thank you All for your kind comments. I am touched by your generosity. Welcome to Migratorius and Dalloway.
This is a lovely haiku Paul with many layers. Sorry, I thought I'd left a comment earlier...
Thank you Frank, your comments are always appreciated.
Post a Comment