Thursday 23 July 2009

adding a touch
of blue to the breeze
dragonfly

MAGNAPOETS Issue 4 July 2009

8 comments:

Devika Jyothi said...

that was unique, Paul :)

wishes,
devika

T.Migratorius said...

I just found your blog by my random clicking from another... I am enthralled with your tanka and haiku. This latest addition to Paper Moon is perfect.

John McDonald said...

terrific one Paul
john

Laurie A. said...

Paul, you've distilled the moment to its essence beautifully. the sense of the lightness of touch is strong for me in this verse. really beautiful.

Emma Dalloway said...

lovely... as Laure says, it shows a light touch

Paul Smith said...

Thank you All for your kind comments. I am touched by your generosity.

Welcome to Migratorius and Dalloway.

Frank... said...

This is a lovely haiku Paul with many layers. Sorry, I thought I'd left a comment earlier...

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Frank, your comments are always appreciated.