Saturday, 1 August 2009

crescent moon -
the surprise of a heron
overhead

5 comments:

Devika said...

i like this Paul,

the word 'surprise' brings an element of life/joy :)

wishes,
devika

Laure said...

really wonderful, Paul.

'surprise' adds great movement to this verse.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Devika and Laure. This poem reminds me of the wealth that we have all around us at any given moment if only we are tuned in to it.

Laure said...

yes! and you are ... tuned in.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Laure, the feeling is mutual.