Friday, 21 August 2009

wanting so much
through the years
but now
just to hold you
to be held

Modern English Tanka V3 No3 Spring 2009


Devika said...

Very nice poem, Paul :)


My wishes to Karen too, knowing she is your wife :)

Frank Williams said...

A beautiful series of moments captured in a sensitive manner Paul...

Laure said...

in youth our wanting takes us away from ourselves ... with age we return home.

beautifully inspired
beautifully felt
beautifully lived
beautifully written

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Devika, Frank & Laure for your comments.

Laure I agree completely that with age we experience a kind of home-coming after a journey we were perhaps never fully aware that we had undertaken.

John McDonald said...

yes great series Paul