Thursday, 13 August 2009

only a dream?
that day we rose
and fell together
weightless through
a summer sky

Modern English Tanka V3 No4 Summer 2009

3 comments:

Laure said...

absolutely perfect. really. truly.

Devika said...

ha! nice Paul :)

wishes,
devika

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Laure & Devika as always your comments are appreciated.