Tuesday, 18 August 2009

your every movement
is like breath to me
a gentle breeze
heading out
across the sea

for Karen on her birthday


Frank Williams said...

A very evocative tanka Paul...

Laure said...

this love honors life.

may Karen wear it as a shawl ...

Devika said...

Very lovely verse as a birthday gift, Paul :)

Happy b'day to Karen...don't know who she is though :)


Paul Smith said...

Thank you Frank, Laure & Devika.

Laure, both Karen and I think the image of a shawl is beautiful, thank you.

Devika, (sorry I should have made it clear) Karen is my wife. Thanks again for your comments.