Friday, 19 February 2010

at the end
of another slow day
I lose the world
entirely
in a yawn

Modern English Tanka V2 No2 Winter 2007

8 comments:

Devika said...

Interesting way to put it, Paul :)

we are becoming sort of isolation wards in our own worlds....or perhaps thats the world of poets?

wishes,
devika

Hope you are well :)

Frank Williams said...

I love the last 3 lines Paul. The whole poem fits together like a jigsaw puzzle.

Dave Serjeant said...

Oh boy - I know what you mean. Love this

T.Migratorius said...

Wow!

lissa said...

yes, I think that's me...

Paul Smith said...

Hi everyone, thank you all for the comments, I'm glad you liked this one.

Welcome to Lissa, it's good to have you here.

Alan Summers said...

Great poem, great comments! ;-)

Alan
Alan’s Area 17 blog
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Paul Smith said...

Thanks Alan.