Friday, 26 February 2010

some days
i just don't care -
this life
a drop of dew
about to fall

9 comments:

lissa said...

that's exactly how I've been all week...thanks for putting it into words...

Paul Smith said...

You're welcome Lissa, thanks for the feedback. I really like your profile picture.

John McDonald said...

excellent sets Paul well done
john

Frank Williams said...

We all feel like that accasionally - very evocative Paul...

Kristin Riggs said...

I have had this kind of day today. Thank you for putting it into words, Paul. Thanks also for your recent comment on my blog.

Sincerely,
Kristin

Paul Smith said...

Hi John, Frank thank you for dropping by.

Alan Summers said...

Another fine tanka poem! ;-)

Alan
Alan's Area 17 blog
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Paul Smith said...

Hi Kristin and Alan, thank you for your comments.

serendipity said...

your words
the dewdrops about to fall
my mind petals open
waiting
to be embellished