Friday, 5 March 2010

right then
when I saw the child in you
at play
I determined not to be
just another of your toys

Modern English Tanka V3 N3 Spring 2009

6 comments:

Dave Serjeant said...

I can think of a number of times when I wish I had made the same resolution.

Good one Paul. Thanks for the nice comments on dl.

John McDonald said...

lovely sets Paul
john

Paul Smith said...

Thanks guys.

Alan Summers said...

More superb tanka, with an interesting new slant.

Look forward to even more tanka, yet again! ;-)

Alan
Alan’s Area 17 blog
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Paul Smith said...

Thanks Alan, you are always a source of encouragement to me.
I hope all is well with you and K.

Alan Summers said...

It's pretty frenetic at the moment. But in a good way. ;-)

all my very best,

Alan
Alan’s Area 17 blog
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