Tuesday, 11 May 2010

in the breeze
light shimmers
across the water
a future memory
in the making

3 comments:

Frank Williams said...

This is very nice, Paul. The Gogyohka is capable of conveying emotions very well...

R.K.SINGH said...

I really liked this brief lyrical poem.
R K

Paul Smith said...

Hi Frank & welcome R.K., thank you for your comments. This new form is quite exciting and is expanding rapidly across Twitter and at Gogyohka Junction.