Friday, 14 May 2010

offering back
my silence
the unimaginable
depths
of the peony

3 comments:

Frank Williams said...

Lovely, Paul - this a poem in my opinion of real substance...

me said...

Life stories in a poem. The unimaginable remains paper moon. His choices along the path, talkative.

Paul Smith said...

Hi Frank & 'me', thank you for dropping by.

Frank this came almost haiku-like in the garden last week and has been received very well at Gogyohka Junction.