Thursday, 17 June 2010

in the stairwell
of my mind
a little boy
sits waiting
for a friend

5 comments:

Devika said...

a little girl sits in mine too...they find their friends,

Nice poems Paul...the four-seasons was especially good :)

Reading regularly, though not always commenting,

wishes,
devika

Kelly Marszycki said...

the solitary image is haunting --

Laura~DancesWithTeddyBears said...

Provocative beauty.

MLA said...

Stairs loom really large in children's minds I think -- they are their first mountains to climb. :)

Paul Smith said...

Thank you all for your comments. I love the way this poem opens different doors to each of us.