Friday, 13 August 2010

in my mind
her words rise
like fish
sending ripples
through another day

7 comments:

Frank said...

A very nice tanka, Paul. In particular, I like the last two lines.

Brian said...

Back in full-force, I see. Hope your time away was restful. Wonderful poem.

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bazza said...

Hello Paul. Welcome back. It's good to see that you have lost none of your skill!

Paul Smith said...

Thanks guys, it's good to be back. Your comments as ever are much appreciated.

Alan Summers said...

Another fine tanka Paul!

Hope you had a great break! ;-)

Alan
With Words
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Paul Smith said...

Thanks Alan, good to hear from you again.