Tuesday 14 December 2010

so many
different paths
to choose
raindrops
on the window

5 comments:

Devika Jyothi said...

Good poem, Paul...it speaks in quite a few levels :)

wishes,
devika

Kristin Riggs said...

This is terrific!

earthgirl said...

...and the path makes all the difference. Beautiful as always, Paul.

Brian said...

An exact, vivid image, Paul. Excellent poem.

Paul Smith said...

Hi Devika, Kristin, Angie & Brian.
Thank you all for commenting on this poem. I like the playful shell of this poem that covers the challenge each of us must take up daily, in the choices we make and the paths we choose to follow.


Brian, great to see you here again. I am a great admirer of your work (as you know) and your comments here mean a lot...