Friday, 3 December 2010

she sees
something beautiful in me
I can tell
by the flowers
in her eyes

11 comments:

Frank said...

That a really lovely poem, Paul...

earthgirl said...

beautiful indeed...I can almost see the petals drifting down her cheek...

Gillena Cox said...

nice

much love
gillena

Paul Smith said...

Hi Frank, Angie, Gillena, thank you so much for your comments... This one has a special resonance for me, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

S said...

like how the first part connects to the second

Betcha said...

The Beauty Lies in the Sparkle of your eyes ,that places tiny rosebuds ,starting to bloom in her eyes for you

Paul Smith said...

Hi S, Betcha, thank you for comments, always appreciated.

jason evans said...

What a bright spot this morning.

I really liked this.

Paul Smith said...

Thanks Jason, I'm glad you enjoyed it...

Kristin Riggs said...

Just lovely, Paul! Hope you are doing well.

-Kristin

Paul Smith said...

Thanks for dropping by Kristin...