Friday, 26 November 2010

a leaf falling
a breath briefly held...
tell me
what else
is this life

9 comments:

Yiota Luyu Ladybird said...

So beautiful, Paul... Life is one breath. The concept touched me deeply. So well said.

Paul Smith said...

Hi Yiota, thank you so much for dropping by, always appreciated.

earthgirl said...

Reminds me..."Nothing gold can stay."

Let's fall slowly, shall we? :)

LG said...

Beautiful....love reading your stuff........

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Angie, LG, for your comments...

falling...
what choice
do we have

GWILYM WILLIAMS said...

Paul, I found you via your comment on zen-speug. I must confess my liking for your treatment of the gogyokha form just discovered here. Lovely moods.

Paul Smith said...

Hi Gwilym, I'm happy to welcome you to Paper Moon. Thank you so much for your kind comments.

Helena Malheur said...

So true… what else is life but "a breath briefly held" -- very nicely done! It's always a pleasure to read your tweets -- I peeked in here to read more of your work and I'm not disappointed, as expected…

Paul Smith said...

Helena, I am so happy that you have found your way to Paper Moon. Thank you so much for your kind comments. I hope you continue to enjoy your time here.