Tanka and other short form poetry
this one makes me want to ask, is man always in conflict with nature...but i think poets generally aren't, or are they?....good poem, Paul :)wishes, devika
Good poem, Paul...
nice poem; yes; you stay focused, as autumn too passes into wintermuch lovegillena
Interestingly, the 'I' of this poem could be you or it could be the autumn wind itself.You just create them and send them into the world and we interpret them!Another little gem, Paul.
Thank you all for your comments. Reading your responses to my work is always a joy.
Never give up! Loved it
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