Monday, 1 November 2010

I won't give up
my dreams
so you might as well
move on -
autumn wind

6 comments:

Devika said...

this one makes me want to ask, is man always in conflict with nature...but i think poets generally aren't, or are they?....good poem, Paul :)

wishes,
devika

Frank said...

Good poem, Paul...

Gillena Cox said...

nice poem; yes; you stay focused, as autumn too passes into winter

much love
gillena

bazza said...

Interestingly, the 'I' of this poem could be you or it could be the autumn wind itself.
You just create them and send them into the world and we interpret them!
Another little gem, Paul.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you all for your comments. Reading your responses to my work is always a joy.

I said...

Never give up! Loved it