Sunday, 24 October 2010

rippling the lake
with a broken branch...
the not knowing what
I came for
turned out to be this

5 comments:

Frank said...

There's a lot to think about in this poem, Paul.

Devika said...

very contemplative poem, Paul...and philosophical - liked it much :)

wishes,
devika

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Frank & Devika, I think we all need a little time doing nothing in particular as we wander through this life. Thank you both for the comments.

Dave Serjeant said...

excellent Paul

Paul Smith said...

Thanks Dave.