Sunday, 10 October 2010

the ink
of night
runs dark -
a river
without swans

8 comments:

Devika said...

a sad poem, Paul...yet, through the dark, through the light, with swans, without swans, the river of life flows,

wishes,
devika

Frank said...

A very atmospheric poem, Paul.

Paul Smith said...

Hi Devika, Frank. Thank you for your comments.

Yes Devika the river runs on with or without us...

jason evans said...

So rich. Not a place for swans.

Devika said...

yes Paul...and think of it that way, there isn't anything to be sad about :)

wishes,
devika

Paul Smith said...

Hi Jason, Devika, I'm glad this one spoke to you, thanks for the comments.

Kristin Riggs said...

I simply love this, Paul.

Paul Smith said...

Thanks Kristin, I appreciate your kind words.