Sunday, 10 October 2010

the ink
of night
runs dark -
a river
without swans

8 comments:

Devika said...

a sad poem, Paul...yet, through the dark, through the light, with swans, without swans, the river of life flows,

wishes,
devika

Frank said...

A very atmospheric poem, Paul.

Paul Smith said...

Hi Devika, Frank. Thank you for your comments.

Yes Devika the river runs on with or without us...

Anonymous said...

So rich. Not a place for swans.

Devika said...

yes Paul...and think of it that way, there isn't anything to be sad about :)

wishes,
devika

Paul Smith said...

Hi Jason, Devika, I'm glad this one spoke to you, thanks for the comments.

Kristin Riggs said...

I simply love this, Paul.

Paul Smith said...

Thanks Kristin, I appreciate your kind words.