Friday, 19 November 2010

across the fields
at dawn
morning rolls
the grey wheel
of another day

4 comments:

earthgirl said...

stark and lovely

Devika said...

Good tanka, Paul...

wishes,
devika

Frank said...

The last two lines are a knock-out, Paul. A lovely autumn tanka...

Paul Smith said...

Hi Angie, Devika, Frank... Glad you liked this one, thanks for dropping by.