Paper Moon

Wednesday, 27 April 2011

I step out
among the first blue notes
of dawn
to read
what's left of the moon

'GUSTS' No13 Spring/Summer 2011

Dave Serjeant said...: lovely Paul.; 28 April 2011 at 01:01
Kirsten Cliff said...: Just brilliant, Paul.; 28 April 2011 at 02:14
Anonymous said...: a beautiful dream...
Renée; 28 April 2011 at 12:19
Frank... said...: Really lovely, Paul. 'first blue notes of dawn' is wonderful...; 29 April 2011 at 12:41
Brian said...: Yes, it's those "first blue notes" and fading moon that give this poem such beauty & power.; 30 April 2011 at 06:35
Devika Jyothi said...: yes 'first blue notes of dawn'...lovely expression & good poem, Paul :)

wishes,
devika; 30 April 2011 at 15:59
LG said...: Lovely words...; 1 May 2011 at 21:59
Anonymous said...: I hope
it's been
a good dream; 4 May 2011 at 17:50
Paul Smith said...: As ever I am deeply touched and greatly encouraged by your comments.

I was initially reluctant to enter the 'cyber sphere' but to have encountered such wonderful people has made the step more than worthwhlie...

Thank you ALL.; 6 May 2011 at 10:57
Paul Smith said...: Obviously I meant 'worthwhile'...; 6 May 2011 at 15:53
Editor said...: I love this

thank you for sharing.

R.B.; 10 May 2011 at 05:33
Paul Smith said...: Thank you ~R~. It's lovely to see you here again.; 10 May 2011 at 19:36