Wednesday, 27 April 2011

I step out
among the first blue notes
of dawn
to read
what's left of the moon

'GUSTS' No13 Spring/Summer 2011

12 comments:

Dave Serjeant said...

lovely Paul.

Kirsten Cliff said...

Just brilliant, Paul.

Looking for Siddhartha said...

a beautiful dream...
Renée

Frank... said...

Really lovely, Paul. 'first blue notes of dawn' is wonderful...

Brian said...

Yes, it's those "first blue notes" and fading moon that give this poem such beauty & power.

Devika said...

yes 'first blue notes of dawn'...lovely expression & good poem, Paul :)

wishes,
devika

LG said...

Lovely words...

ahora-giocanda said...

I hope
it's been
a good dream

Paul Smith said...

As ever I am deeply touched and greatly encouraged by your comments.

I was initially reluctant to enter the 'cyber sphere' but to have encountered such wonderful people has made the step more than worthwhlie...

Thank you ALL.

Paul Smith said...

Obviously I meant 'worthwhile'...

Editor said...

I love this


thank you for sharing.

R.B.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you ~R~. It's lovely to see you here again.