Tanka and other short form poetry
Just brilliant, Paul.
a beautiful dream...Renée
Really lovely, Paul. 'first blue notes of dawn' is wonderful...
Yes, it's those "first blue notes" and fading moon that give this poem such beauty & power.
yes 'first blue notes of dawn'...lovely expression & good poem, Paul :)wishes, devika
I hopeit's beena good dream
As ever I am deeply touched and greatly encouraged by your comments. I was initially reluctant to enter the 'cyber sphere' but to have encountered such wonderful people has made the step more than worthwhlie...Thank you ALL.
Obviously I meant 'worthwhile'...
I love thisthank you for sharing.R.B.
Thank you ~R~. It's lovely to see you here again.
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