Tanka and other short form poetry
silent wake glittersdragonfly glides over bluelanding on green blade
peaceful step into the secretof nature
An excellent haiku, Paul...
Beautiful identification of the breath with the "breathing" of the natural world. How often we forget we are a part that.
Nice haiku, Paul...Brian said it for me :)wishes, devika
Thank you all for dropping by. Your comments and poetic responses are greatly appreciated.
Thank you all for your comments.I've been out on the water a few times lately canoeing and this one just happened along on one of the trips.
excellent! beautiful! took my breath away
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