Friday, 6 May 2011

the lake unfolds...
a ripple
for each breath

10 comments:

Margie said...

Beautiful!

nance marie said...

silent wake glitters
dragonfly glides over blue
landing on green blade

Dave Serjeant said...

excellent Paul

Renée said...

peaceful step
into the secret
of nature

Frank... said...

An excellent haiku, Paul...

Brian said...

Beautiful identification of the breath with the "breathing" of the natural world. How often we forget we are a part that.

Devika said...

Nice haiku, Paul...Brian said it for me :)

wishes,
devika

Paul Smith said...

Thank you all for dropping by. Your comments and poetic responses are greatly appreciated.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you all for your comments.

I've been out on the water a few times lately canoeing and this one just happened along on one of the trips.

aditya said...

excellent! beautiful! took my breath away