Thursday, 12 May 2011

spring dusk -
the river pauses
for a moment
to take the weight
of a swan

12 comments:

John McDonald said...

excellent stuff here Paul
john

Mark Holloway said...

- a lovely way of expressing that moment, Paul !

Brian said...

Like the descent of an avatar. Profoundly beautiful, Paul.

Frank... said...

A wonderful moment, Paul. I like the idea of the river pausing...

Devika said...

so beautifully put, Paul...kind of awed by the poet's perceptive power :)

wishes,
devika

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Devika, your comments as always are inspiring.

Brian said...

Like the descent of an avatar. Profoundly moving, Paul.

Renée said...

what a beautiful moment of stillness and peace...!

Renée

Frank... said...

A wonderful moment, Paul...

Paul Smith said...

Thank you Brian, Renee, Frank, it is a pleasure to journey with you on this Paper Moon...

Paul Smith said...

Hi John, Mark, sorry for the late acknowledgement but 'blogger' stole your comments for a while, I'm glad to see you're back...

janetd said...

your poetry paints beautiful pictures.