Paper Moon

Thursday, 12 May 2011

spring dusk -
the river pauses
for a moment
to take the weight
of a swan

John McDonald said...: excellent stuff here Paul
john; 12 May 2011 at 14:59
Mark Holloway said...: - a lovely way of expressing that moment, Paul !; 12 May 2011 at 18:08
Brian said...: Like the descent of an avatar. Profoundly beautiful, Paul.; 12 May 2011 at 18:49
Frank... said...: A wonderful moment, Paul. I like the idea of the river pausing...; 12 May 2011 at 19:06
Devika Jyothi said...: so beautifully put, Paul...kind of awed by the poet's perceptive power :)

wishes,
devika; 14 May 2011 at 06:37
Paul Smith said...: Thank you Devika, your comments as always are inspiring.; 15 May 2011 at 21:10
Brian said...: Like the descent of an avatar. Profoundly moving, Paul.; 15 May 2011 at 23:01
Anonymous said...: what a beautiful moment of stillness and peace...!

Renée; 16 May 2011 at 06:47
Frank... said...: A wonderful moment, Paul...; 17 May 2011 at 13:16
Paul Smith said...: Thank you Brian, Renee, Frank, it is a pleasure to journey with you on this Paper Moon...; 17 May 2011 at 20:28
Paul Smith said...: Hi John, Mark, sorry for the late acknowledgement but 'blogger' stole your comments for a while, I'm glad to see you're back...; 24 May 2011 at 19:41
janetld said...: your poetry paints beautiful pictures.; 29 June 2011 at 18:29